This book is excellent for those who write well and want to write evenbetter.
Zinsser patiently instructs his readerson how to write about travel or science, how to conduct an interview, how to craft an effective leadand ending, and even how to get started. Along the way, Zinsser entreats us to omit clutter andcliché, strike out useless adverbs, adjectives, and qualifiers, incorporate active verbs, andstrive for correct usage as well as unity of pronoun, tense, and mood. But the overriding messagesare clarity, simplicity, and directness. Keep it crisp. Oh, and just like driving a car, alwayssignal your intentions (keep that "but" at the beginning of the sentence).
Two specific pages inZinsser's book have remained etched in my mind from the moment I took them in almost two decadesago. They comprise the most genuine and revealing demonstration I have ever seen in a book onwriting. On those two pages (pages 10 and 11 in the first edition), Zinsser provides a glimpse atthe penultimate draft of the very book you are reading, juxtaposed with the corresponding pages infinal form; in so doing, Zinsser invites you to critically examine his own writing, while revealingsomething of his process. This was brilliant. Those few pages (penultimate draft plus final draft)are alone worth the price of the book.
The lessons in this comparison are profound: First, Zinsserhimself practices what he professes, but more importantly, even he is prone to inflate sentenceswith useless verbiage. What Zinsser has beautifully illustrated is how his writing came to be sotight. It did not spring from his mind to paper in the form we see; rather, it was gradually shapedthrough repeated editing, much of it with the aim of removing unnecessary words. (One could saythat he is more like Beethoven, who endlessly rewrote, rather than Mozart, who composed finishedworks in one stroke.) I immediately adopted this practice and to this day I devote several finalediting passes to the removal of useless words. I can think of no other lesson that I have learnedin my 22 years of formal education that has been so enduring and consistently useful.
In the pastdecade I have recommended this book to each of my graduate students, and nearly all of mycolleagues; at times I have simply purchased a copy and presented it to them. Of course, such agesture can be taken the wrong way. It needn't imply that one's writing is in desperate need ofrepair, but rather that the content is worthy of concise expression. It was in the latter spiritthat I shared Zinsser's book with my students and colleagues, and I believe all have gained fromit.
Do yourself a life-long favor and read this wonderful book. It won't take long, yet itslessons might forever change the way you write. Your readers will benefit, and you will benefit.
Topics covered in this are the principles of the transaction in using the Englishlanguage to achieve the greatest clarity and strength. Most important rule is the one of simplicity.Clutter is a killer. Remember the KISS rule. Keep It Simple Smartypants! Believe in your ownidentity and your own opinions. Style is important. Sell yourself, and your subject will expressit's own appeal. Get to know your audience. For example E. B. White could write about anything andmake it sound good. Even if it was chickens! For words, what could we do without them? The end ofcivilization in catastrophic propostions, right? Invest in a good dictionary, book of synonyms, athesaurus and 'The Elements of Style.' Words are the only tools you got. Use them with originalityand care. Always remember that somebody's out there listening. The book is chalk ful of such usefuladvice my review couldn't squeeze them all in. If you want the step in the write direction, I'dhighly recommend this. You'll be using this and the "Elements of Style' book by Strunk & White. Iknow I am.